quayquay17's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[Seven Nation Army]

ehrm..

well leaving out how bad it is (^_^)

the bass line does not go back

(if you know anything about guitar) the bass is ALWAYS 9-9-12-9-7-5-4

aaand when you bring in the guitar you dont go straight into it..

Los-Illuminados responds:

lol im not against you, i totally agree, i just had a thought in my head and it came out nothing like it. so whoops >.<

[Industrial Acid]

ugh

youve got two diferent loops going here that have different bpm's... disaster.

also, its just two loops.

maybe you dont care but if you dont want reviews like this dont submit things made from two preset loops that dont even match

TacozRule responds:

Uh... I had more than two loops. The reason I made this was just a test. I submitted it just for the hell of it. Maybe you should READ THE DESCRIPTION before you act like a total dick, rather than giving me advice on how to improve it.

[Moonlight Through Misty Air]

this sucks ass.

...NOT!

so what will you say? hehe, beautiful song. i liked that piano there, the glitches were pulled off pretty well, overall a very nice sound

LLAAPPSSEE responds:

Hey man, thanks a load for your words and ears. I'm glad you liked it! Mrah-hah!

[In Submerged Light]

nice

mellow, soothing, as usual, i enjoyed the poem. a little repetitive, but i dont mind too much.

i really liked the little touches here and there. sounds nice, like when i go scuba diving, it doesnt feel like staying down there forever.

5/5

LLAAPPSSEE responds:

oh man, another review from you! And your the first to finally review this song, too, awesome. Again, thank you for the words and ears. I'm glad you enjoy my writing and such too..
Yeah, i was just trying to go for something a bit more repetitive with slow subtle changes, but something that was nice to listen to even in its repetitive nature.

As far as the moment were the 'dive' takes place in the song, i always wondered if i made it a bit too short. I could / should go back and lengthen that part , eh?

[I Burn Bridges]

ehrr...

i hate to get negative but, the drums sounded like someone just having in their basement, without a song playing, it hovers all over the place totally out of time, the vocals were alright... for a skate-rock song! sorry, but i like my ska fluid

also, where's the jumpy upbeats? i didnt find that very ska like, maybe punk/pop/bad drumming

again my apologies for the negative review. hope you guys can improve it, and good luck!

HyruleanHyroe responds:

Well, regarding the drums, that's most likely a mixing issue. The guy who did our recording didn't put much effort into making sure everything matched up correctly. I assure you, our drummer is very talented and almost always dead-on (except when he goes a bit crazy and loses a stick :P ).

Apart from that, I have no excuses, other than that we were young and naive. And we suck. :D If we ever get our new stuff done, and it sounds the way it's supposed to, then I'm sure you'll at least like it a bit better.

Oh, and thank you for the message, I love to hear peoples' comments on the secret song!

[Sea Of Cloud]

amazing

such a beautiful song, you can listen to over and over without getting bored, the mastering seemed fine. and overall its a lovely relaxed tone.

great song, hope to hear more like it.

LLAAPPSSEE responds:

Thank you. I really appreciate your review and am joyed to hear you like this song! Thank you for stopping by and having a listen.

[Airstrike Summit (DEMO)]

good

nice buildup, cool sounds, but some of the instruments didnt really fit with eachother... regardless, i liked it and it would be perfect for a game!

5/5

nightsurfermusic responds:

PM me some of the sounds you think don't fit in quite right. That would be helpful.

[Hatshepsut's Tomb]

muhahahahahaha

i started playing it, i got interested, listened more, started moving...

i ended up grabbing my speakers and shoving them to my ears, im not sure if thats healthy, but the way the sounds move made my ears orgasm. lovely, the eastern sounds fit really well! NICE STUFF!!!!

Sephora responds:

I do like the effect when the volume is high, glad you did too.

["Hes a Pirate prev" Nintechno]

haha

nice start, mind if i use it as background music to my website? proper credit will be added, as well as a link to you NG page.
good stuff!

Nintechno responds:

Sounds Great! Yea, please leave links.

[Talking To Myself]

that

was probably the best indie song ive ever heard on NG

i love this! although the vocals dont really match the distortion, it still sounds great

LenardNotLenny responds:

Yes! Thanks for the ten.